Today is Sunday and I tried to get onto poets.com to see if there were any new reviews of the two latest poems I submitted, "Roslyn Harbor I" and "IV". I did change the titles of these two poems to "Raindrops" and "Get Dressed. Go Home". The poems can be found on pages 20 & 24 of my book, ADDENDA if you're interested. Anyway, to get on with the story, when I got to the sign in page, I couldn't access my poems. The message I got was that my trial period was over, and now I had to buy "a package" if I wanted to continue reviewing others and getting my own reviewed. The packages consisted of one month for $5.95 and quarterly for $15. I chose the one month package. And so I finally got in and found two reviews for each of the poems I submitted yesterday. (At the end of this blog are two reviews and star ratings for "Raindrops" and one for "Get Dressed...) I've submitted about 13 poems to this web and all of them have gotten some very exciting and gratifying comments. I will continue there until my package is up, then goodbye.
Rhoda went to a birthday party for the 3yr.old son of a former bowling teammate. That gave me time to get out and have breakfast and buy a couple of flourescent bulbs for our kitchen fixture. I had a bacon and egg sandwich on white bread and coffee. Of course, after I didn't get out of bed until 10:45, I couldn't and didn't get out of the house until 1pm for my breakfast. I therefore have no clue as to when "lunch" will come for me. Rhoda said she's making my "comfort" food for dinner---hot dogs. For dessert, I'll probably pop in some Ghirardelli dark chocolate. Nothing else going on this lazy Sunday that readers would be much interested in. Not unless you care that the USA National soccer team just scored against Brazil to lead 1-0! Wowie!
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wow .what great imagery you get in your words.good use of words also.well done.beautiful write.plz.read Teardrops from Heaven.thanks.
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oh man all i can say is bravo this is a beautiful piece written in the true shakespearian model i am impressed
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A lovely poem-invokes sympathy for the situation. Doesn't she really want him to stay ?
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